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richbo
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posted 12-31-2000 07:28 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
i have some more to tell-
but i'm gonna wait becuz NOBODY is around right now to read them- that's okay.
I SHALL RETURN-!

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richbo
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posted 12-31-2000 07:28 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Next Year-!

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richbo
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posted 12-31-2000 07:30 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
This message was edited becuz i felt like it-

[This message has been edited by richbo (edited 01-01-2001).]

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jkelley
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posted 12-31-2000 07:39 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I'm here....I'll come back later to read the poem.

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richbo
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posted 01-01-2001 08:24 AM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

"Deny DENIAL"-

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richbo
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posted 01-01-2001 05:40 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

"ROCKSLIDE"

Burning
Burning
Burning hot steam-
Magma- the thunder of the earth
And its flesh thereof
Pounding
Pounding
Pounding and waiting
Waiting...
To explode- up
Upwards thrust
The swelling
The moving
The rumbling into motion
Rock then turns into roll
Rolling up
Up into the sky
A climax of dust &
Heat & steam &
Fury that is the volcano.
A plethora of energy
Exhausted...
And then- in its wake
The promise of new life.
Life with which to begin again...

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lostfairytales
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posted 01-02-2001 04:58 AM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Richbo, I really enjoyed your latest poem. [scratches her head] I wonder what you were thinking of when you wrote that... [giggles to herself to not make that much of a deal]...

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JulieMallen
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posted 01-02-2001 06:10 AM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Awaken me from this dream
I dare you
For I do not interpert as those of old
As the smallest of the giant fury
I no longer have the strength to fight
How can one with no wings take flight?
Holiness calls it demands to much
The wonder of heaven beckons
You ask to much of a poor maiden girl
Any idea the cruelity in this world?
Silence surpasses the world around me
Yet some way you still have found me
Now that truely does astound me
Stand no more on bended knee
All I ever longed for was the chance to be free
One moment in time when I could just be me
Answer beloved have you the riddle in hand?
I stand here complete in no mans land
Flesh and blood was made of me
But I have eyes that clearly see
The darkness now all around
Why must expresssion feel like
A foolish circus clown?
Watch me as I stand at the edge of time
For at "ll" all you had to do was drop a dime
To turn back the hands of time
But now divided we all fall
Unity true unity was the secret after all
Yes, it was the key that unlocked the hidden door
Where are the men of faith from of old?
They are all to busy having fun
Basking in the light of the shining sun
But will soon grow cold for the truth season has begun
Listen tell me what you hear
There is one that still holds you dear
I will my friend always be near~

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JulieMallen
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posted 01-02-2001 06:14 AM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Dancing in the morning light
Music is my wings of flight
I do not know what you are looking for
I do not have the key to the hidden door
I can go where ever I like
I am just completly ordinary
I blend right in
But that is the secret to truely fitting in
Here I'll show you the way
That you too can dance in the light of a new day
Take a walk in the morning air
Open your heart see God if you dare~

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richbo
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posted 01-02-2001 06:55 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Julie Mallen- those were very eloquently related-!
Are they yours?
i admit to posting poetry that was not mine (being TOO MUCH genius for me!)
Just curious... Hi Lostfairytales-!
You are a fondness that i truly desire...

Okay- this one's called-... (actually this one has no title)

He touched her gentle cheek
As the morning dew caressed
The rising of the dawn.
Her soft hips caressed his warmful sigh
And he waited for her open eyes
To offer the foreverness of his love.

"Sparkling wine of radiance
Her hair doth shine like the sea-
Colors of dawn drifting
Down upon her skin.
Innocence yet untamed.

Soft you glow! And how!
Watching as she doth rise-
Speak to her sweet and now
With wings of love in your eyes.

Doubt thou the stars are a' fire
Doubt that the sun doth not move
Doubt truth to be a liar
But never doubt I LOVE.

In a warm union of body and soul
By the sunlight of understanding
They together are twice within thrice
And in thrice they become one."

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richbo
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posted 01-03-2001 08:02 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
okay since i actually HAVE BEER & CIGARETTES at this moment i'm going to post one of my last poems (to date) and then i'm going to smoke a cigarette and drink a beer-

Falling & Rising
Rising
Rising
Air
Moist & wet &
Honey dripping
Like the warm skin between
Your thighs
The little highs
And the sound of an
Eloping sigh
Marks the beginning of the end.
As I reach in to touch you
The cries turn and writhe
Around &
Around &
Back into the recesses
Of my heart.
Jet black graffiti sprayed
Against a colored background
Hanging in broken galleries
Of a once called tortured soul.
Petals of metals
And flakes of flowers
The fragrance of your lips
Surpass the motion
Of your hips
Tension...
Tension...
Climax and
Release..
The beauty is for you alone
The Ecstasy-
The Ecstasy is for us both...

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lostfairytales
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posted 01-04-2001 03:00 AM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Great poem, Richbo.

A quick breath
A moment of silence
Nothing once again
Fades off to sleep
One last time before morning
But again it happens
You sit up in bed
Waiting for the worst
Yet nothing again
This time it can't be stopped
Your thoughts hear it again
This time you're sitting up
Starting nawing at your nails
What can I do
What will happen to me
Tears start to fall
God, help me
Well, that's all you say
But today it isn't enough
Tomorrow isn't quite here yet
Something lurks in the dark
It makes a secret cry
You and only you can hear
It isn't nice
It seems to laugh
And maybe make funny of you
Oh, brilliant
Turn the radio on
Oh, what a surprise
It isn't working
Goodness what are you going to do
Hope God is protecting me
That's all I hope now
You fade you here
Get away from me
Oh, but I can't you hear
I'm forever your pained
So lose me as you wish
And something will go not like it should!!!

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lostfairytales
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posted 01-04-2001 03:04 AM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Sorry. Something made me write that. I never wrote it before I wrote it just now. Please forgive that. It isn't a poem. I don't know what it is. Sorry again, richbo.

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richbo
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posted 01-04-2001 08:55 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
lostfairytales-
don't ever be sorry. these things come from the heart, which is more than i can say for some of the those who have visited this site...
i don't have much left to contribute to this thread, which makes me feel this thing is going to die soon but until it happens, i've a few things to add- (and yes, i miss FrederickCleveland and Isabel)

"PASSIONED"

Their eyes never shifted, never
wavered. Both faces were glassy and
almost wax-like under all of the charry
grime wiped upon their skin. A barrage
of echoeing gunfire collapsed in the
background. The sky was blood red and
liken to sweat. Thick desolation inched
its way along the horizon.
Studded in their battle uniforms,
old and proven, the opposing warriors
sat; the surroundings no more than rubble
of a long forgotten store house. It was extremely dark for the time of day that
it was.
The day?
There was no day; no year, and no time.
Frozen titans in a war too long
fought to remember the right or reason.
And then one of them spoke.
"Got a family?" His voice was tired
and very deep.
"Don't know." The other was remorseful.
"Had a wife?"
"Yeah, and two kids."
"Really."
"Sure. Chris- he's the oldest, and
Jennifer."
"My wife's name was Jennifer."
There was silence. Even as the gunfire
continued.
"Your gun really loaded-?" asked the
second.
"Both barrels."
"I don't think you'll really be needin' both of them."
"Nice of you to tell me."
"If you shoot me..."
"It works both ways."
"So, what do we do now?"
"Why don't we just - sit here for a
little while," he sat back as the blood
from his head wound trickled down his
face. He grinned a little, finishing his
sentence. "-And see what happens."
"What's your name?"
"Haven't got one. And you?"
"Don't remember."
"You gotta swig-?"
"Sure-"
The man reached down and pulled out
a small flask of whiskey. Keeping one
hand on his gun, he tossed the drink over
to the other. Their eyes never shifted,
even as the second man reached down to
pick it up. He placed the open bottle
to his lips. The contents warmed his
chilled organs.
"Thanks."


(i wrote this in 1985)

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richbo
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posted 01-06-2001 05:59 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
y'all can go FUCK yerselves- i'm gonna keep my motherfucking base for as long as Greenlight exists- (or they dump me off this thing).
This is a drunken bump (that being because i'm drunk...)
Oh and i've decided- i'm NOT GOING to dedicate a poem to Bad David-
Fuck you asshole...

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richbo
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posted 01-06-2001 06:20 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
HEy- it's okay! i'm so drunk i can keep bumping this all night...

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Sachet
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posted 01-06-2001 06:32 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Gee, why are you mad at Bad David?

Lostfairytales, with a little polish I think you've got something there. It seems to have a nice cadence as you read. Not a rhyme but a flow. And the end is unexpected. Poems don't have to rhyme but evoke an experience, a feeling. I liked it. And I'm one very critical bitch!

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JCleveland
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posted 01-06-2001 09:48 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Drinking from the neck of the city that sleeps. The clouds must have a destination in mind, moving along in such a hurry, raining baptism uninvitingly through the pores of the inebriated, and elusively taunting the factious temperaments walking the streets. Gradually replenishing the morality that we insistently drain away.You and I, I think we’ve yet to meet.

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JCleveland
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posted 01-06-2001 09:52 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
The child asked for her mother, but she was not there.
The mother asked for forgiveness, but her God did not care.
The people wanted to know how such a fate could have happened.
Life laughed for a moment, then responded...
"It is I who uncovers their path and it is Hope that distracts them."

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lostfairytales
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posted 01-07-2001 03:17 AM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks, Sachet...
Here's another for your pleasuring eyes:

I'm sittin' in the livingroom
I see people talking to each other on tv
What would it be like
To speak single word to you
Your reply would be kind
Oh, I long to hear your voice

I'm just waitin'
Yes, for you to walk in the door
I often have dreams of the day
Now I know it could never be
If I only got to know you
That would be the day
Oh, that would be the day

As I walk to my car I see lovers
They are sharing kisses of love
What would it feel like
To share a single kiss with you
Would it make our hearts as one
Oh, I long to share a lover's kiss
Yet you are forever faraway

I lay awake in my bed
My mind wishes so many things
Yet, it comes back to me
What would it feel like
To be held by you
Told to never worry you are here
My heart always starts to pound at that
Yet, I know it could never be

Why do I torture myself
Do I like seein' pain
You have been taken from us
That is all I want to know
I know it was fate
I ask if you were my true-love
And it always goes to one thing
My heart poundin' faster

Just waitin'
But not for you to walk through the door
For me to find you wherever you are
Love can build things
It has built my heavenly door
And yes, when that day comes
I'll find you with love in my heart
And a kiss on my lips...

Sappy one to lighten the mood!!!

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Indigo
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posted 01-07-2001 03:39 AM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Of all the mysteries of the universe,
None is so ripe for the reveling as the fruit of life.
From whence we came there we exit
and all is a continual cycle of growth.
We are born in the spring of time.
Reach to our summer sun.
Nourish the world with our ideas, talents and dreams.
Then are left rotting,
to fertilize a new crop of mankind,
as we realize that winter has enveloped us.
Never to be heard from again.

Indigo

I knew that didn't sound right. I left out a line.

[This message has been edited by Indigo (edited 01-07-2001).]

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lostfairytales
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posted 01-07-2001 03:59 AM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Here's another, but dreary from a dark past of mine:

Tears start to flow
Memory comes
Oh, pain and sorrow

She sits down
She starts to write
"Dear..."

"You no longer..."
Thoughts of her mother
Her hollering and yelling comes to mind

"Leave a message..."
A friend who always said she'll be there
Not now, at the time most needed

"I'll talk to ya tomorrow..."
A man, she always trusted
Didn't have a single moment for her

Tears start looking like rain
"Goodbye..."
A lovely word that gives her real peace
The last letter she was to ever write
Was now signed in her BLOOD...

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richbo
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posted 01-07-2001 12:39 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
for the record i'm not mad at Bad David- he's got his clique and i've got mine. Think of him as my John Booth- the cool guy in school that never gave a fuck about anyone except who was in his own stupid fucking group. The guy never once said "hi" to me and if he had, i might've liked him- but Fuck the "in" crowd- that's my own baggage... so enuf about enuf of that-

Okay, this here one goes out to Amanda:

LISTEN-

You're now thirsting- walking in the desert
All alone
You're now searching- lost in isolation
From your soul
When the bullet you bite
From the pain you request
You're finding it harder to
Digest
When the answers you seek
Are the ones you destroy
Your anger's no decoy-
Why? Why can't you listen?
Why can't your hear?
Why don't you listen- LOVE springs Everywhere.

You now hunger- feeding your mind with
Selfishness
You now wander- aimlessly around your
Consciousness
When the prophecies fail
And your thoughts become weak
The silence creates necessity
And you're floating yourself with the ships of
Despair
Your courage now impaired-
Why can't you listen?
LOVE springs Everywhere...

You crucify all honesty
No sign to see- do you believe?
And all your words- just twist & turn
You're flying just to crash and burn
Fighting to the bitter end- if only your heart
Could open...
Would it listen?

(Author UNKNOWN)

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JulieMallen
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posted 01-07-2001 01:56 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
<<<Richbo!
Sorry it took me so long to answer your question.
Yes, all the poetry you have seen mepost, I write on this board is all written by me.
Except fot the very first poem I posted I actually wrote part of it and an old friend of mine wrote part of it.
He was having writers block and I was able to help him.
But all the others ones I write the moment I open the thread off the top of my head.
I enjoy all of the great beauty and talent on this thread thanks for keeping it alive!


Siiting all alone
Waiting by the stupid phone
Sensless to wait like this
For that imaginary someday kiss
How can one ever think of someone they never miss?
I long to look into your eyes
then I will know if life has been one big lie
It is you and you alone
I will wait forever by the un-ringing phone.

Just wrote this for the hell of it right now!
;-)
;-)

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lostfairytales
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posted 01-07-2001 08:38 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
What a talented bunch!!!

The music stops
The rain pours
What was once beauty
Is now fallen hope

Who is to say
What is
What could be
Or what should have been

Who is the greatest of all
Why tell me great one
Is it you I miss

Chuckling to one's self
As a thunder bolt hits close by
One doesn't chuckle at that
One runs for home
But where is home that one might say

Nowhere, but somewhere
Confusing!!!
But quite amusing...

It is a poem of a bit nonsense

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dragongirl
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posted 01-07-2001 09:24 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
#1 Crush - Garbage

I would die for you
I would die for you
I've been dying just to feel you by my side
To know that you're mine

I would cry for you
I would cry for you
I would wash away your pain with all my tears
And drown you in fear

I will pray for you
I will pray for you
I will sell my soul for something pure and true
For someone like you

See your face every place that I walk in
Hear your voice every time that I'm talking
You won't believe in me
And I will never be ignored

I will burn for you
Feel pain for you
I would twist a knife and bleed my aching heart
And tear it apart

Violate all the love that I'm missing
Throw away all the pain that I'm feeling
You won't believe in me
And I can never be ignored

I would die for you
I would kill for you
I would steal for you
I'd do time for you
I'd sail ships for you
To be close to you
To be part of you
'Cause I believe in you
I believe in you
I would die for you

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dragongirl
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posted 01-07-2001 09:33 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Have you ever? - Brandy

Have you ever loved somebody so much
It makes you cry
Have you ever needed something so bad
You can't sleep at night
Have you ever tried to find the words
But they don't come out right
Have you ever, have you ever

Have you ever been in love
Been in love so bad
You'd do anything to make them understand
Have you ever had someone steal your heart away
You'd give anything to make them feel the same
Have you ever searched for words to get you in their heart
But you don't know what to say
And you don't know where to start

Have you ever loved somebody so much
It makes you cry
Have you ever needed something so bad
You can't sleep at night
Have you ever tried to find the words
But they don't come out right
Have you ever, have you ever

Have you ever found the one
You've dreamed of all your life
You'd do anything to look into their eyes
Have you finally found the one you've given your heart to
Only to find that one won't give their heart to you
Have you ever closed your eyes and
Dreamed that they were there
And all you can do is wait for that day when they will care

Have you ever loved somebody so much
It makes you cry
Have you ever needed something so bad
You can't sleep at night
Have you ever tried to find the words
But they don't come out right
Have you ever, have you ever...?

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theblondewritr
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posted 01-07-2001 10:51 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Beer. Nothing more
Nothing less.
Shall I embibe?
Yes.
I'll have the 'hoppy-one'
this time.
Not because it's cheaper.

You like it?
Mmmmm, That's good!
Have another, it's on-the-house.
I like to share my homebrew with you: - )

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lostfairytales
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posted 01-09-2001 02:10 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
A simple secret
Never to be told
One who hold such
Never knows much
She wishes to tell
But knows she's fail
Her heart is in this
A simple phrase
If she says
One worry she has
Nothing less
What she wants to say
Her truth from within
She has feelings deeper
Than a friend should
Her heart is content with this
But her worry is
Will he want this
Is he willing to give her the chance
She understands his loss
She understands his fears
She just wonders if he knows
She wonders if he's ready yet....


[This message has been edited by lostfairytales (edited 01-09-2001).]

[This message has been edited by lostfairytales (edited 01-09-2001).]

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lostfairytales
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posted 01-10-2001 12:59 AM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I guess that last poem says it all....

[lostfairytales runs off and hides behind the wall of dreams wondering if the one that poem is intended for will ever see it and understand...]

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richbo
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posted 01-10-2001 06:34 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
i don't know about that, Lostfairytales-
but this one's here for you-

"beautiful"

beautiful, you're beautiful, as beautiful as the sun
Wonderful, you're wonderful, as wonderful as they come
And i can't help but feel attached
To the feelings i can't even match
With my face pressed up unto the glass,
Wanting you..
Beautiful, you're beautiful, as beautiful as the
Sky
Wonderful, it's wonderful, to know that you're just like i
And i'm sure you know me well, as i'm sure you don't
But you just can't tell
Who you'll love and who you won't
And i love you- as you love me
So let the clouds roll by your face
We'll let the world spin on to
Another place
We'll climb the tallest tree above it all
To look down on you and me and them-
And i'm sure you know me well,
As i'm sure you don't
But you just can't tell,
Who you'll love, or who you won't-

Don't let your life wrap up around you
Don't forget to write, whenever
i'll be here just waiting just for you
i'll be under your stars forever
Neither here, nor there
Just right beside you-
i'll be under the stars forever
Neither here nor there, but right beside you...

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JulieMallen
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posted 01-10-2001 08:58 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Just about the time I come to terms with it
Shrug it off tell myself it's to far fetch
Silly girl,You are far from the perfect catch
Then I see a glimpse of you in the clear starry nite
Once agin my mind wonders what it would be like to hold you tight
To hold you tight? Till morning light!
For you alone I would stand and fight
Hopless helpless dreamer am I
I just really need to stop wondering why
It is,what it is that's all
Look how majestic beautiful and tall
Not a fare match for someone so fragil and small
But man judges by the eye
But the heart looks through time and space
Consuming the material eye
With it's fiery darts of love the arrow falls
One knows not where
Whence the heart was first struck
But I am sure that it was far more them sheer pot luck
I sit alone yet I know you are near
There is a ultra violet wave
That holds you to me dear
Shooting from my brain
I know it sends my love straight to your frame~
No denying it
It's just there
and when I feel it
I lose all care
Lost in just the mere thought of you
I think and pray everyday for you
I wonder if one will ever become two
Or will the two someday become one~

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batgirl3780
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posted 01-10-2001 09:44 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
quote:
Originally posted by richbo:
Fuck you too.
OKAY- here goes-
1ST poem-

"A LETTER TO NOBODY"-

You don't know me.
Because you don't want to.
Or maybe it's because you don't care.
Maybe I'm an unwanted intrusion or
Maybe I'm a superficial invasion
Of your privacy.
You don't know me.
And that's the way you'd like to keep it.
Because to tell you the truth-
It's more convenient that way
For you. And for me, too, I suppose.
When I cry, you're not there to hold me &
When I laugh, it's not from one of your emotions;
The walks I take &
The nights I lie awake;
The phone that doesn't ring &
The songs I tend to sing don't move you to
Tears or
Love or
Fears or
Hate, because-
You don't know me.
I've tried &
I've cried &
I've lied to myself about you.
Maybe it's my fault you don't know me.
Maybe I've found a thousand reasons
To keep you from sharing
To keep you from caring
To keep you from running into my arms &
Knowing all about me.
But it's not all that.
It's you too.
You just don't care &
You don't want
To share yourself with me.
So just go on then,
And walk in your pretty little way,
And speak the trivial little things you say;
And when you cry-
Wipe it on somebody else's shoulder.
Because I don't know you.
And that's the way I'd like to keep it.

-"I'll BE BACK-"


i connected with this. i like it. it's kind of the way i feel right now.

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batgirl3780
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posted 01-10-2001 09:52 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
quote:
Originally posted by richbo:
Hey Fred- you're alright by me, man!
OKAY
5TH poem-(this one's dedicated to Once)


We are more than friends &
Less than lovers-
Two spirits crafted apart but
Made as one.
I reflect you as you do me
The closeness to you is like
No other but-
You are further apart than
Anyone I see
So across the Great Divide
I'll wave & say goodbye
Then turn away...

[This message has been edited by richbo (edited 12-20-2000).]

[This message has been edited by richbo (edited 12-21-2000).]


why would you say goodbye to someone that you seem to have such a deep connection with?

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batgirl3780
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posted 01-10-2001 10:13 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Indigo:
I blanket you with inconsistencies.
Choke you with arrogance.
And yet you stayed.
The ceilings crack under the weight of my petulance.
The walls bleed my abuse.
And yet you stayed.
Your body absorbed my passion.
Your soul absorbed my ache.
And yet you stayed.
If I tear, will you bleed for me?
If crash, will you bruise?
You stayed when I couldn’t .
Are you still there?

Indigo


i like that i feel like this too!

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lostfairytales
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posted 01-11-2001 03:07 AM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
A smile rises in her eye
For she nows what is
Something she thought would be
Now is just what should be
Her heart she gives
Her mind lays to rest
For no thoughts or plans she needs
She knows he'll be around

A tear falls from her bright eyes
It isn't for sadness
It's the great joy that she feels
It's the burning sensation in her bosom
For she is happy he's there for her
Something she has always wanted
But never really had
It is the greatness of one's word

Thanks you for all you are
You bring joy to me
And happiness to my heart
Things you say are just perfect
When you say them
Don't change for no one
You're perfect the way you are

(dedicated to Richbo)
Smile :0)

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posted 01-11-2001 11:34 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
i am just so AWED by the response to this thread- i never really felt like anyone would ACTUALLY CONNECT with any feelings i had concerning my poems... or that i would be able to CONNECT to anyone else's poems, for that matter-
Batgirl37(something):
it was nice of you to drop by. i am the kind of person who likes to address anyone who makes an effort- (unlike Bad David and some other assholes on this crazy fucking thing we call the Greenlight Forum)-
Jcleveland, i'm sorry i didn't get around to acknowledging you-
i have recently given up smoking, but that doesn't mean "Beer & Cigarettes" can't be the staple for others-! (NOT TO ENCOURAGE VICES-!!!)
y'all stay real. Maybe this thread has a chance against the new "30 SOMETHING" (you know what i'm talking about!!!)
peace-
richbo

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lostfairytales
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posted 01-12-2001 03:10 AM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Anything has a chance if you take that effort. Bad David isn't all that bad though. He's one guy that did make me realize this is a good group to talk with. After awhile he stopped writing in my earliest thread. He just isn't a very socialable guy. Richbo, did he do something to you to make you upset? Hey, if it wasn't for him, I'd never have gotten to know you. :0( or :0). A smile a day keeps the dreariness away:0)

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posted 01-12-2001 04:09 AM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Good Morning BUMP!
<<<<<<<<Ricbo that is so awesome that you quit smoking!!!!
Did you know that your body begins to repair itself the moment we stop doing a bad habit?
This is very true!
You should be so proud of yourself!
Quitting smoking was the most difficult bad habit I ever tried to brake.
What a miracle you are!
;-)

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posted 01-12-2001 03:32 PM         Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
ah, cigarettes just weren't DOING it for me anymore. Now if i could just wrestle the BEER thing to the floor, i'd be a WINNER AGAIN-!

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