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Author | Topic: BEER & CIGARETTES... |
richbo Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() i have some more to tell- but i'm gonna wait becuz NOBODY is around right now to read them- that's okay. I SHALL RETURN-! IP: Logged |
richbo Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Next Year-! IP: Logged |
richbo Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() This message was edited becuz i felt like it- ![]() [This message has been edited by richbo (edited 01-01-2001).] IP: Logged |
jkelley Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm here....I'll come back later to read the poem. IP: Logged |
richbo Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Deny DENIAL"- IP: Logged |
richbo Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() "ROCKSLIDE" Burning IP: Logged |
lostfairytales Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Richbo, I really enjoyed your latest poem. [scratches her head] I wonder what you were thinking of when you wrote that... [giggles to herself to not make that much of a deal]... IP: Logged |
JulieMallen Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awaken me from this dream I dare you For I do not interpert as those of old As the smallest of the giant fury I no longer have the strength to fight How can one with no wings take flight? Holiness calls it demands to much The wonder of heaven beckons You ask to much of a poor maiden girl Any idea the cruelity in this world? Silence surpasses the world around me Yet some way you still have found me Now that truely does astound me Stand no more on bended knee All I ever longed for was the chance to be free One moment in time when I could just be me Answer beloved have you the riddle in hand? I stand here complete in no mans land Flesh and blood was made of me But I have eyes that clearly see The darkness now all around Why must expresssion feel like A foolish circus clown? Watch me as I stand at the edge of time For at "ll" all you had to do was drop a dime To turn back the hands of time But now divided we all fall Unity true unity was the secret after all Yes, it was the key that unlocked the hidden door Where are the men of faith from of old? They are all to busy having fun Basking in the light of the shining sun But will soon grow cold for the truth season has begun Listen tell me what you hear There is one that still holds you dear I will my friend always be near~ IP: Logged |
JulieMallen Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dancing in the morning light Music is my wings of flight I do not know what you are looking for I do not have the key to the hidden door I can go where ever I like I am just completly ordinary I blend right in But that is the secret to truely fitting in Here I'll show you the way That you too can dance in the light of a new day Take a walk in the morning air Open your heart see God if you dare~ IP: Logged |
richbo Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Julie Mallen- those were very eloquently related-! Are they yours? i admit to posting poetry that was not mine (being TOO MUCH genius for me!) Just curious... Hi Lostfairytales-! You are a fondness that i truly desire... Okay- this one's called-... (actually this one has no title) He touched her gentle cheek "Sparkling wine of radiance Soft you glow! And how! Doubt thou the stars are a' fire In a warm union of body and soul IP: Logged |
richbo Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay since i actually HAVE BEER & CIGARETTES at this moment i'm going to post one of my last poems (to date) and then i'm going to smoke a cigarette and drink a beer- Falling & Rising IP: Logged |
lostfairytales Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great poem, Richbo. A quick breath IP: Logged |
lostfairytales Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry. Something made me write that. I never wrote it before I wrote it just now. Please forgive that. It isn't a poem. I don't know what it is. Sorry again, richbo. IP: Logged |
richbo Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() lostfairytales- don't ever be sorry. these things come from the heart, which is more than i can say for some of the those who have visited this site... i don't have much left to contribute to this thread, which makes me feel this thing is going to die soon but until it happens, i've a few things to add- (and yes, i miss FrederickCleveland and Isabel) "PASSIONED" Their eyes never shifted, never
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richbo Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() y'all can go FUCK yerselves- i'm gonna keep my motherfucking base for as long as Greenlight exists- (or they dump me off this thing). This is a drunken bump (that being because i'm drunk...) Oh and i've decided- i'm NOT GOING to dedicate a poem to Bad David- Fuck you asshole... IP: Logged |
richbo Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() HEy- it's okay! i'm so drunk i can keep bumping this all night... ![]() IP: Logged |
Sachet Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gee, why are you mad at Bad David? Lostfairytales, with a little polish I think you've got something there. It seems to have a nice cadence as you read. Not a rhyme but a flow. And the end is unexpected. Poems don't have to rhyme but evoke an experience, a feeling. I liked it. And I'm one very critical bitch! IP: Logged |
JCleveland Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Drinking from the neck of the city that sleeps. The clouds must have a destination in mind, moving along in such a hurry, raining baptism uninvitingly through the pores of the inebriated, and elusively taunting the factious temperaments walking the streets. Gradually replenishing the morality that we insistently drain away.You and I, I think we’ve yet to meet. IP: Logged |
JCleveland Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() The child asked for her mother, but she was not there. The mother asked for forgiveness, but her God did not care. The people wanted to know how such a fate could have happened. Life laughed for a moment, then responded... "It is I who uncovers their path and it is Hope that distracts them." IP: Logged |
lostfairytales Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks, Sachet... Here's another for your pleasuring eyes: I'm sittin' in the livingroom I'm just waitin' As I walk to my car I see lovers I lay awake in my bed Why do I torture myself Just waitin' Sappy one to lighten the mood!!! IP: Logged |
Indigo Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Of all the mysteries of the universe, None is so ripe for the reveling as the fruit of life. From whence we came there we exit and all is a continual cycle of growth. We are born in the spring of time. Reach to our summer sun. Nourish the world with our ideas, talents and dreams. Then are left rotting, to fertilize a new crop of mankind, as we realize that winter has enveloped us. Never to be heard from again. Indigo I knew that didn't sound right. I left out a line. [This message has been edited by Indigo (edited 01-07-2001).] IP: Logged |
lostfairytales Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Here's another, but dreary from a dark past of mine: Tears start to flow She sits down "You no longer..." "Leave a message..." "I'll talk to ya tomorrow..." Tears start looking like rain IP: Logged |
richbo Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() for the record i'm not mad at Bad David- he's got his clique and i've got mine. Think of him as my John Booth- the cool guy in school that never gave a fuck about anyone except who was in his own stupid fucking group. The guy never once said "hi" to me and if he had, i might've liked him- but Fuck the "in" crowd- that's my own baggage... so enuf about enuf of that- Okay, this here one goes out to Amanda: LISTEN- You're now thirsting- walking in the desert You now hunger- feeding your mind with You crucify all honesty (Author UNKNOWN) IP: Logged |
JulieMallen Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() <<<Richbo! Sorry it took me so long to answer your question. Yes, all the poetry you have seen mepost, I write on this board is all written by me. Except fot the very first poem I posted I actually wrote part of it and an old friend of mine wrote part of it. He was having writers block and I was able to help him. But all the others ones I write the moment I open the thread off the top of my head. I enjoy all of the great beauty and talent on this thread thanks for keeping it alive!
Just wrote this for the hell of it right now! IP: Logged |
lostfairytales Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a talented bunch!!! The music stops Who is to say Who is the greatest of all Chuckling to one's self Nowhere, but somewhere It is a poem of a bit nonsense IP: Logged |
dragongirl Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() #1 Crush - Garbage I would die for you I would cry for you I will pray for you See your face every place that I walk in I will burn for you Violate all the love that I'm missing I would die for you IP: Logged |
dragongirl Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have you ever? - Brandy Have you ever loved somebody so much Have you ever been in love Have you ever loved somebody so much Have you ever found the one Have you ever loved somebody so much [This message has been edited by dragongirl (edited 01-07-2001).] IP: Logged |
theblondewritr Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beer. Nothing more Nothing less. Shall I embibe? Yes. I'll have the 'hoppy-one' this time. Not because it's cheaper. You like it? IP: Logged |
lostfairytales Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() A simple secret Never to be told One who hold such Never knows much She wishes to tell But knows she's fail Her heart is in this A simple phrase If she says One worry she has Nothing less What she wants to say Her truth from within She has feelings deeper Than a friend should Her heart is content with this But her worry is Will he want this Is he willing to give her the chance She understands his loss She understands his fears She just wonders if he knows She wonders if he's ready yet....
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lostfairytales Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() I guess that last poem says it all.... [lostfairytales runs off and hides behind the wall of dreams wondering if the one that poem is intended for will ever see it and understand...] IP: Logged |
richbo Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() i don't know about that, Lostfairytales- but this one's here for you- "beautiful" beautiful, you're beautiful, as beautiful as the sun Don't let your life wrap up around you IP: Logged |
JulieMallen Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just about the time I come to terms with it Shrug it off tell myself it's to far fetch Silly girl,You are far from the perfect catch Then I see a glimpse of you in the clear starry nite Once agin my mind wonders what it would be like to hold you tight To hold you tight? Till morning light! For you alone I would stand and fight Hopless helpless dreamer am I I just really need to stop wondering why It is,what it is that's all Look how majestic beautiful and tall Not a fare match for someone so fragil and small But man judges by the eye But the heart looks through time and space Consuming the material eye With it's fiery darts of love the arrow falls One knows not where Whence the heart was first struck But I am sure that it was far more them sheer pot luck I sit alone yet I know you are near There is a ultra violet wave That holds you to me dear Shooting from my brain I know it sends my love straight to your frame~ No denying it It's just there and when I feel it I lose all care Lost in just the mere thought of you I think and pray everyday for you I wonder if one will ever become two Or will the two someday become one~ IP: Logged |
batgirl3780 Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() quote: i connected with this. i like it. it's kind of the way i feel right now. IP: Logged |
batgirl3780 Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() quote: why would you say goodbye to someone that you seem to have such a deep connection with? IP: Logged |
batgirl3780 Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() quote: i like that IP: Logged |
lostfairytales Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() A smile rises in her eye For she nows what is Something she thought would be Now is just what should be Her heart she gives Her mind lays to rest For no thoughts or plans she needs She knows he'll be around A tear falls from her bright eyes Thanks you for all you are (dedicated to Richbo) IP: Logged |
richbo Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am just so AWED by the response to this thread- i never really felt like anyone would ACTUALLY CONNECT with any feelings i had concerning my poems... or that i would be able to CONNECT to anyone else's poems, for that matter- Batgirl37(something): it was nice of you to drop by. i am the kind of person who likes to address anyone who makes an effort- (unlike Bad David and some other assholes on this crazy fucking thing we call the Greenlight Forum)- Jcleveland, i'm sorry i didn't get around to acknowledging you- i have recently given up smoking, but that doesn't mean "Beer & Cigarettes" can't be the staple for others-! (NOT TO ENCOURAGE VICES-!!!) y'all stay real. Maybe this thread has a chance against the new "30 SOMETHING" (you know what i'm talking about!!!) peace- richbo
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lostfairytales Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Anything has a chance if you take that effort. Bad David isn't all that bad though. He's one guy that did make me realize this is a good group to talk with. After awhile he stopped writing in my earliest thread. He just isn't a very socialable guy. Richbo, did he do something to you to make you upset? Hey, if it wasn't for him, I'd never have gotten to know you. :0( or :0). A smile a day keeps the dreariness away:0) IP: Logged |
JulieMallen Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good Morning BUMP! <<<<<<<<Ricbo that is so awesome that you quit smoking!!!! Did you know that your body begins to repair itself the moment we stop doing a bad habit? This is very true! You should be so proud of yourself! Quitting smoking was the most difficult bad habit I ever tried to brake. What a miracle you are! ;-) IP: Logged |
richbo Member |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah, cigarettes just weren't DOING it for me anymore. Now if i could just wrestle the BEER thing to the floor, i'd be a WINNER AGAIN-! ![]() IP: Logged |
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