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Episode 2 : Paper Trail
Miramax Script Notes
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First, read the "Stolen Summer" script if you haven't already. Then, read the first script notes Producer Chris Moore and Co-Producer Jeff Balis received from Miramax Execs Jon Gordon and Michelle Sy regarding "the main script issues [they] feel need to be addressed." Find out if their thoughts on tone, main characters, and religion match up with your ideas on how Pete should re-write his script.

LivePlanet & Miramax Script Notes
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Here are the first official notes Pete received on his script. They are from: Ben Affleck, Matt Damon, Chris Moore, Jeff Balis, Jon Gordon and Michelle Sy. You will notice issues with the year 1976 as well as with the fire set piece and O'Malley family size. Let the script battle begin!

Jeff Balis Script Notes
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"Stolen Summer" Co-Producer Jeff Balis' thoughts on how Pete could make his script funnier, less tragic, and more compelling.

Pete's Reply to Script Notes
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It doesn't get more behind the scenes than this. Now that you have read what the people in charge think about the script, it is time to read Pete's rebuttal. With which points does Pete agree and for which elements does he fight? You might be surprised.

"Stolen Summer" Script Excerpt
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In the show, Jeff Balis suggests to Pete Jones that the last scene of his script, in which Pete and the Rabbi discuss changing the name of Jesus to Danny, is confusing and over the top. What do you think? Read the excerpted scene and decide for yourself.

Character Breakdown
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Straight from the office of Casting Director Joseph Middleton comes the original "breakdown" for the characters of Stolen Summer. The character breakdown is crucial because it helps the casting director identify the perfect actor for each role. Based on these descriptions, try to come up with your own lists for each character before reading Joseph's lists and find out if you have what it takes to cast movies in Hollywood.

Pete's Letter to Sean Penn
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Directors often write letters to the members of their dream cast in the hopes of catching them on a good day. (Don't laugh - Damon and Affleck got Robin Williams for "Good Will Hunting.") Read this sweet, sappy, and ego-stroking letter that the former insurance salesman sent to Mr. Penn with a copy of the script. Remember, as you saw in the show, Pete missed his wife's birthday to get this just right!

Chris Moore's Letter to Sean Penn
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How does a powerful Hollywood Producer help court an actor for his first time director (and get more money for his budget)? Read the original letter written by Chris Moore to Sean Penn. Do you think Chris helped or hindered Pete's chances of persuading Penn to play the part of Joe?

Pete's Letter to Emma Thompson
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"Joe" needed a "Margaret." So here is Pete's unedited letter to Emma Thompson regarding the role of Margaret for "Stolen Summer." Per Joseph Middleton's suggestion, Pete sent this letter with a version of his script that included an expanded scene featuring Margaret in an attempt to make the role more appealing. Do you think the letter is persuasive or too mushy?

"Rabbi" & "Joe" Cast List 3/6
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For a hint on how to read cast lists: See our Glossary. "Available," "unavailable," here is your big chance to see which actors were working (or not) during the shooting of "Stolen Summer." Sorry, we've had to black out the agencies where the talent is represented. We can't give away all the secrets!

"Joe" Cast List 3/26
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Scoring a big name actor for this role could literally mean millions more for the "Stolen Summer" budget. Find out who's "in the mix" and who has already passed. Which of the available actors on this list is most likely to take a chance on a first time director?

NYC Casting Notes for 3/29
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If you were directing a movie, and were based in Los Angeles, you might make a special trip out East to meet New York actors. Each day you would likely receive a document like this letting you know with whom you were meeting. The notes at the bottom serve as an update on your film's casting in general.

Casting Update 4/4
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One month in, here are the lists for the following roles: "Rabbi," "Margaret," "Joe," "Patrick," and "Father." Compare this update to the original cast lists and you will see how hard at work our fearless casting director has been.

Casting Suggestions 5/3
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Can you say "down to the wire?" Two weeks until principal photography begins and still no Margaret! Find out eleventh hour ideas and who has already read the script and liked it. Place your bets now on who you think will win the role.

Girl Scouts Respond!
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A response to Casting Director Joseph Middleton's comments regarding Girl Scout Cookies.

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